Teralyn at A Writer's Journey tagged me during the A-Z Challenge, so I thought it would be a great post for today. Thanks, Teralyn!
I did The Lucky 7 Meme here, and now I'm going to do it again with my current WIP.
If you haven't heard about this before, here are The Rules:
- Go to page 77 of your current MS/WIP.
- Go to line 7.
- Copy down the next 7 lines – sentences or paragraphs – and post them as they’re written. No cheating.
- Tag 7 authors.
- Let them know.
How dare she! How dare she! Miss Isla Pertwee, of all the people at this atrocious place.
How dare she make him look so foolish! In front of everyone.
They’d laughed. At him! They’d turned and pointed and laughed, and then – worst of
all, the very worst thing of all – they’d tutted, disparagingly, and walked
away. From him! From Abraham Zephaniah Andrews!
Now, right now, as he sat there at that table by
the window, people were whispering about him from behind the shelves, peering
at him through gaps in rows of books.
I'm not going to tag anyone because after so many of you have just completed the A-Z Challenge I know everyone's feeling a bit shellshocked and trying to get back down to Earth. Consider yourself tagged if you'd like to share an excerpt - it's quite liberating sharing something so brief!
But a lot of personality in that excerpt!
ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt! I've done the meme, and then someone else tagged me. I haven't done it on the WIP I'm working on (I did it on the one currently on vacation). The meme doesn't fall in a good place in my wip, and I'm not good at cheating (except to tweak the excerpt slightly because last time it was from my first draft and you know how bad those are). :D
ReplyDeleteEditing is definitely cheating lol - but then, I'd never be brave enough to post up a first draft!
Deletewow, loved your excerpt! Intense in detail and emotion- so much said in few words. Good stuff!
ReplyDeleteyou have such an awesome voice!
ReplyDeleteThat was great! I could picture the scene - a lot of imagery for so few lines.
ReplyDeleteI posted mine on my blog: www.michelle-pickett.com/blog
That was great! A lot of imagery for so few lines - I could picture the scene.
ReplyDeleteI posted mine on my blog: www.michelle-pickett.com/blog
If you chose to read it remember it's YA.
Sorry for the double post. Internet - oh how I love when it gets cranky. :)
ReplyDeleteIt's been a nightmare for me recently too!
DeleteThis excerpt totally has my attention! Very, very nice with such a strong voice!
ReplyDeleteYou've all said such lovely things - THANK YOU!
ReplyDeleteI'm not replying individually because it would just be thank you, thank you, thank you all the way down, but I really appreciate your kind words :-)
Congrats on the tag... really enjoyed your excerpt. Loved the voice.
ReplyDeleteI love the character names! Very cute! P.S. thanks for not tagging me. lol
ReplyDeleteThat was kind fun and it's quite an entertaining idea, but thanks for not passing on the tag! Brain dead! Thanks for your visits, I've missed making the rounds and look forward to visiting more.
ReplyDeleteI'm completely lost, but in a good way:) Happy Saturday to you...
ReplyDeleteI want to know what she said about him - and if it was true.
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't feel too sorry for him, Patsy, he kinda deserved it :-)
Deletelove the snippet! somebody got caught!
ReplyDeleteI like the whispering behind shelves. Really cool image.
ReplyDeleteHahahaha I think I was tagged 5 times, but none of my other WiPs are in electronic format, so I'm too lazy to respond. :-D
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